Update

The lines of my piece are too light to be seen in a picture! But progress has made and I have a plan as to what the rest will look like.

Group Critique

Brooke, Geoff, Murray.

An important issue brought up was that I may not have enough time to finish my piece, a solution to that issue would cutting off part of my canvas to have less space to work with. The idea of color, is to bring attention to the image and help the viewer have a path in which they follow while observing. I was recomended to use a paint marker, because it is easier to make distinct lines while paint would create for a rougher image. Which may not be a bad idea, something I must think about. A major issue, is that my lines aren't dark enough. This is because of the way I draw, to make sure I get the cleanest lines I can. The group recommend I go over them again, maybe when a pen. I am concerned of this idea, because I am worried I will lose the neatness that I work so hard to achieve. The last idea is to incorporate a visually confusing image such as a staircase in which you cant tell which way it is going or how it works. This would add an effect of an optical illusion which would be great for the overall theme of the piece.